So... Here We Go!

Phew! done at last.. wardrobe, drawers, almirah, all arranged neat as a pin. Well, it wouldn't be the same tomorrow, but that's a different story...Oh! I forgot to introduce myself. I'm Radha and I'm 15 Years old. I was just preoccupied a little with saaf - safaai of my room. I'm sure that you all must be inevitably participating in Swachhata Abhiyan, at home of course, during this lockdown. Well, this Swachhata has some side effects too, one being that you are drawn towards the world of memories. Like, when I was cleaning my drawers, I found my book in which I write anything and everything I feel. This book contains all my poems and write-ups from childhood till the present age of adolescence. So, while dusting the drawers, some dust wore off my brains and I suddenly thought, why not share my poetry and write-ups with people who are interested to read it and can give useful feedback to hone my writing skills , instead of archiving it in my drawer? So, here I am, writing my first ever  blog. To begin with, I'm going to share with you a poem based on this lockdown as I'm sure that we all would have a story to tell to our next generation about the virus that shook us all -  Corona.

वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे....

वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे
जब स्वाधीन होकर भी पराधीन मह्सूस हो रहा था
जब अपने ही घर में ठहरना भारी पड रहा था
वो दिन भी बडे यादगार थे
वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे।

वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे 
जब घर का काम स्वयं कर रहे थे
जब असली मेहनत क अनुभव ले रहे थे
वो दिन भी बडे यादगार थे
वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे।

वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे
जब स्कूल, औफिस और घर एक से लग रहे थे
जब बच्चे पहली बार छुट्टियों का निषेध कर रहे थे
वो दिन भी बडे  यादगार थे
वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे।

वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे 
जब पुरानी यारी स्क्रीन द्वारा मिल रही थी
जब रिश्तेदारों को बार बार फोन करने की इच्छा हो रही थी
वो दिन भी बडे  यादगार थे
वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे।

वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे
जब अपने लघुत्त्व का अंदाज़ा हो रहा था
जब प्रकृति के सामने इंसान का दर्ज़ा दिख रहा था
वो दिन भी बडे यादगार थे
वो दिन भी क्या दिन थे।

Today was just a beginning and I would continue posting more poems and write-ups in the following days.... I thank everyone who is reading this and would appreciate their feedback. By the way, has anyone ever wondered what a song on the Journey of Life would sound like? well, I don't know the tune yet, but I think I have the couplets ready for my next blog...
BBye
Until next time

Comments

  1. Very interesting!!! Keep posting and expressing yourself beta!!!

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  2. Wow Radha! Please keep writing!!

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  3. Very nice poem .. good blog .. keep it up ..

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  5. Very nice Radha. Keep writing. 👍👍

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  6. Very original and refreshing keep up the good work

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  7. Maaast. Keep it up Radha 👍👏

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  8. Dear Radha. You are blessed with language and vocabulary. I love hindi language and poems in Hindi. You have superbly captured the miniscule existance of human being. You have all the wishes and blessings beta....keep gifting us your wonderful creations. Bless you and lots of love.

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  9. Very matured writing at this age.. God bless.

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  10. Wow Radha😍 nicely expressed👏👏 Keep posting

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  11. Very well written... Keep it up! 🙂

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  12. Radha proud of you. So matured at this young age.

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  13. Isn't it the best portrayal of these days!! Mot much keen of saaf safai😉 great work👌👌👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😎

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  14. So proud of you. You are gifted..
    simple but impact making words..

    Sujata ( rashmee's school friend)

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  15. Very good keep it up👌👌👍👍

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  16. Radha. ..too good...keep it up...

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  17. Wow..Radha..nice words..your hindi is fabulous.👌👌keep writing👍👍

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  18. Woah! That was too amazing to be a blog! Great idea of having a gala time making blogs at home... That poem had to be published in some esteemed magazine!

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  19. Very nice Radha.. keep writing more.

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  20. Thank you so much eveyone for your encouraging words😊 it means a lot.... we'll meet again with my next blog.

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  21. Very well presented....keep it up

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  22. Wow... खुप छान... असचं लिहित रहा.. keep expressing yourself through writting... best wishes..

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